Perry Maddox explains how to redo a resume by making one powerful change that will help you to land that interview.
One week I lost my job.
The next week, a friend destroyed my resume.
After being downsized during the 2008 economic downturn, I asked a colleague to review my resume. He returned it covered in red ink. Almost every line in what I thought was a good resume came back with red marks on it. It all needed to change. My resume might as well have been dripping red.
I’d received a painful, but important, lesson in how to redo a resume.
The Big Resume Mistake that People Make All the Time.
As I hit the job market recently, I’ve been networking with colleagues and job seekers. So when a friend shared her resume with me recently, I was happy to give it a review.
Bear in mind, this friend is a senior executive of a global organization. A real pro, she knows how to build a career and how to communicate. Yet, when I opened her resume, I immediately saw my mistake from 2008.
It’s a mistake that I’ve seen hundreds of people make over the years. It’s also the core step when I advise someone on how to redo their resume. So I pulled out my red pen and started marking every instance of what I call:
The Job Description Mistake
Nothing squeezes the life of out a resume or CV like this mistake. Sadly, it’s a mistake that almost everyone makes at some point. It goes like this:
- In the experience section of a resume or CV,
- The person lists bullets under each job that mirror the tasks listed in their old job description, and
- Sometimes they even paste in the actual job description bullets.
It’s a understandable mistake, listing the tasks you did in previous roles.
Unfortunately, it will kill your resume.
How to Redo A Resume: From Tasks to Results
A hiring manager doesn’t want to know what you did in your last role. They can guess that from your title. Instead, hiring managers want to know:
- How well you did your work
- What impact you created
- What changed as a result of your work
- What you achieved in the role.
In short:
Less tasks, more results.
They want you to tell a story. If you simply paste in an old job description, or list the tasks you performed, don’t expect a phone call. But when you know how to redo a resume to tell a story about results, that’s when the magic happens.
Here’s how:
Use Numbers to Quantify. Numbers are your friend. Use them generously to demonstrate:
- Scope, scale and size of your previous roles, responsibilities and accomplishments (e.g. # of staff managed, $ size of budgets, # people impacted, # sales made).
- Quality results, often as a percentage (e.g. % targets met, % staff satisfaction, % team retention, % good performance ratings).
- Change (e.g. % financial growth) and speed (e.g. % change over a time period).
Tell a Story with each and every bullet.
- Before & After. Referring to a previous situation or a starting point, show what you did and then demonstrate the result.
- Challenges overcome. Same as above
- STAR. Take inspiration from the STAR interview method, demonstrating your impact in a situation.
- Use action verbs like “improved”, “transformed”, “grew”, and “reduced” with numbers to show the change you created.
Superlatives. Make your resume a trophy case.
- Awards you’ve won (individual or team) are great evidence of your quality.
- Quotes. Perhaps you got a great performance review? Use part of it. I include a quote from a past review in my resume and cover letter. It catches the eye.
- Stand out. Were you a top performer, a sector leader, published in an important outlet? Did your work receive a good rating from an auditor, a donor or an independent reviewer? Use it
Now that You Know How to Redo a Resume.
Don’t wait.
I won’t sugar coat it:
Doing this probably means reworking EVERY bullet in your experience section.
If that sounds like a painstaking job that requires time and effort, it is. It is also worth the effort. Done correctly, a resume that pops will transform your chances of getting an interview.
Just don’t wait.
You never know when that great job lead will come. When I took this advice way back in 2008, I wrote the resume that landed me a role with Restless Development.
I went from a resume dripping with red ink to one that changed my life.
Not bad for a bit of editing.
(A special thank you to Jason Cochran for taking the time to review a young professional’s resume in 2008 and helping to set my career on its way, like you have with so many others)
2 Comments
Thank you Perry
A pleasure to hear it, and I’m glad this one was of help! There are a couple other resources in the jobs section on the blog here that might be of help too.